Re: (Fiction) Fumbling Towards Ecstasy
Nah it's good feedback Pepsi, stuff I've noticed myself... it was somehting I wrote a while ago, it was going to be part of a novel... and that was just a random excerpt I wrote... but I liked a lot of it that's why I shared it...
I do actually have a completed novel length story (77,000 words I think)... but that's way too long to share here lol
If anyone would like to read it (baring in mind its only a first draft and the first 50,000 words were written in 23 days) PM me your email address and I'll send it to you...
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