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Old 06-24-2008, 08:28 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Default Re: (Fiction) Fumbling Towards Ecstasy

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Originally Posted by Vautrin View Post
You have a very good writing style, AJ. Although the ending appears to be a bit 'rushed'. Hope to respond more indepth in a couple of days, if not sooner.
That's because it was just the beginning.. but I can't finish it now.
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