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Old 06-24-2008, 02:09 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Default Re: (Fiction) Fumbling Towards Ecstasy

You have a very good writing style, AJ. Although the ending appears to be a bit 'rushed'. Hope to respond more indepth in a couple of days, if not sooner.
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